Monday 21 September 2015

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 55

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED


PART 55




Air in the room shifted, when Geet raised her head from Nikita’s shoulder she found Maan standing in the doorway. Nikita stepped back, leaving Geet on her own. A fresh wave of emotion hit her as she looked into the eyes she had thought she wouldn’t see again.

It was nothing short of a miracle.

Maan didn’t move; he stayed rooted at the door taking her in. Then like a tornado he came at her, pulling her against him so fast n tight that all breath whooshed out of Geet’s lungs. Her arms wrapped around his neck as Maan swept her off the floor.

When he put her down, his voice was quivery at her ear. And it’s proved again, wherever you go, however far you run… I am going to get you. We are meant to be together. Tears streamed down both their faces, uninhibited. But this is the last time Geet. I don’t think I’ll live through another of your failed run off. Maan flattened his hand over her face removing the hairs that obstructed her eyes from him while Geet stood overwhelmed by the sudden turn of events. She tried to form some words… an apology? A thanks? The news of her pregnancy? Something… anything.

Maan, I-

Don’t... First of all, we get out of this shithole. Nikita take Geet to our hotel in your car. I will get her bag and follow you in mine. Before Nikita took her out, Geet hugged Maan fiercely; in return he wiped her tears n kissed her lips. We have a lot to talk about, love.

Nikita walked Geet to her car that rested on the other side of the road, across the Inn. They slid inside. I have to tell my friend that his lead was right n I have found you, but my phone hasn’t got signal. I’ll go see if Maan’s cell has any.

Maan came out of the Inn with Geet’s duffle bag n threw it in the back seat of his car that stood beside the Inn’s disfigured entrance. Nikita crossed the road n jogged to Maan while Geet saw them from inside the car. They argued for few seconds over something before Maan gave her his phone n sat inside the vehicle. Geet smiled through tears at the always disagreeing pair of siblings. A man with a suitcase walked past Maan n Nikita. Although, as he moved ahead he left the suitcase inches away from where Nikita was standing beside Maan’s car and talking on the phone.

To Geet’s eyes it felt odd. Maan n Nikita, however, didn’t seem to notice the suitcase sitting idly on the road. Geet’s eyes looked for the owner of the suitcase. He looked back to see the suitcase n hurried down the road. He hadn’t left it back by mistake, which was so weird. Something was wrong, Geet’s thought as she got out of the car n started to cross the road. Maan looked at her with raised brows through the windshield. She pointed towards the suitcase. Before Maan could turn his head to see what she was indicating, there was a blast... a massive pulse of energy and heat that hurled Geet back at the car. She smacked against metal n glass sliding down to the ground.

The deafening noise made her ears ring followed by fire n gravel flying everywhere. Geet sat sprawled feeling no pain, nothing. Something wet was running down the back of her head and her ears still rang. There was black smoke all around n no movements. She searched for Maan, mouth trying to form his name but could only cough in the smoke, inhaling too much of it. Her eyes started to drop n body went slack, dropping sideways giving in to the oblivion as Nikita’s words flowed through her brain.

"Until you have that phone, you are traceable."




Geet woke up to hospital sounds- machines beeping, general hustle-bustle of people moving outside her door. The subtle noises were oddly low, humming at a distance. With great effort she opened her heavy eyes and sat up, practically feeling the blood rush in her veins at her movement. Her back instantly throbbed with pain as all the IVs attached to her body tried to pull her back. A nurse rushed inside saying something. With narrowed eyes, Geet looked at the nurse to discern her words but even her voice seemed distant. Geet patted her left ear with palm figuring out that it wasn’t quite working.

Maan… Nikita, where are they? She yanked the tubes off her arms n neck, wincing at the sting, n shambled towards the door. The nurse protested but couldn’t stop her. Outside the door, Geet struggled at the sudden burst of light. She made her way to the enquiry desk where the woman was shocked at her sight.

Can you tell me… where Maan Singh Khurana n Nikita Khurana is? Her voice was uncharacteristically rough like she had swallowed a fistful of course rocks.

Room no. 36 n 37, fourth floor. Ma’am, are you sure you should be here?

Without answering, Geet took the elevator n got off on fourth floor. She looked left n right, asked a stranger where Room 36 n 37 were, then proceeded towards them with the support of wall. There were people huddled outside the two rooms, faces somber. Opening the door Geet looked inside the first room. A couple of doctors were standing; nurses were switching off the machines n in middle of activity lay a body covered in white sheet till the head, immobile. The stench of death hung thick in the air. Geet just somehow knew; she was too familiar with it. No. She sobbed, running to the other room.

Geet felt Maan before she even opened the door. Nobody was there in this room. Maan was lying on the bed, absolutely pale, so pale, he looked… dead. Geet was harshly turned around as few doctors went inside Maan’s room. You killed them. It was Dadimaa spitting the words at Geet. She was hysteric. You killed my children. I told him to leave you. I told him- Somebody pulled Dadimaa away n Geet’s legs shook. She collapsed, in shock, disbelief. Several people came to her aid, but not a second later she rose n ran. Her wobbly legs supporting her gingerly; her heart throbbed, struggling to pump enough blood.

People stared frighteningly as an injured girl ran through the corridors in hospital gown, nobody quite feeling her loss.

She took the flight of stairs, going down n down as her mind did, spiraling down in abyss so crippled with pain. Through the hallway she came out in the open, n still didn’t stop running-now huffing n stumbling in middle of the road. Several beings gasped, few thought she was deranged. Vehicles had to change course at last moment so they wouldn’t run into her. Geet jumped aside at the road- clueless, weeping. A lost soul in crowd. 

You said… you would never leave me. You promised to always be there to love me n protect me. Yet here I live n you’re gone. I don’t want to live. I… refuse to live. She whispered n sobbed, like Maan could hear any of it. A heavy truck was making its way on the busy road; she eyed its approach hungrily, smiling at sweet sensation that coursed at the idea of eluding all pain n going to her Maan.

The truck was coming nearer n she took a step out of the darkness. Its roar was musical to her ears- her way to Maan. I’m coming. She told just as the truck reached the desired spot, she stepped in front of it, caught in its blinding headlights. But, there was some life inside her left. It wasn’t hers. Her hand as if controlled by some outwardly power moved to her belly. She heard the thump, time stopping as she felt what she had failed to notice till now. Maan’s part in her. At last second, she stepped back. The driver of the truck flew profanities at her as Geet again fell unconscious on the road.





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18 comments:

  1. It was just a moment they were together and hell again separated.. is it tat maan and nikita died or is this dadima's plan to get geet out of maan's life.. god wat has happened to their life.. the blast but how did it happen...

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  2. no this can't be happening..
    how can maan die so soon.
    their is so much to left . so many moments to share.

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  3. :'( :'( :'( :'(
    Sona :)

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  4. Hain!!!!!
    Its all an illusion na? 😷😷😷😷😷

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  5. abhi to mile the phir bichad gaye... i guess nikii is gone... heartbroken... milene k phele hi bichad gaye...

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  6. So sad part.. Nikita n Maan found her.. but again Mr. C must have traced her.. gosh the man is really cruel.. n she is alone again.. with life's battle.. n Maan n nikita both fighting for their life.. Dadima is really what can we expect from her... gosh..

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  7. What the hell! So even Mr.C traced Geet cos of her phone. Damn.

    The blast came as shock even though I had a feeling this reunion is not the ultimate one. But never in my wildest dreams I could guess a blast and Maan and Nikita being hurt while saving Geet.

    You love torturing Geet I guess. She doesn't even have a minute to celebrate having her love back with her and you snatched it off her hands so cruelly. I don't want either of them dead. Not Nikita nor Maan. And I'm more surprised that Geet even thought her baby could he alive. I mean she was anyway running like a mad for 3 days before that she was stressed out and now with the impact she hit her back against the car, it is even possible her baby survives? She was already to weak to carry a baby in her. If she is still pregnant it would be no less than a miracle.

    Rest I don't even know what exactly happened Maan or Nikita. Are they really dead or did Dadima lie again?

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  8. sad part but so good what a cruel thing she is going through waiting for next part

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  9. So sad waiting for the next update

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  10. Osheeeeeennnnn.......wat the hell wassss dat.....!!!!!....
    .just in the last update....der was so.much happiness....
    I still cannot believe wat has happened.......
    Out of all d things i had nt imagined or guessed something so disastrous to happen .....
    Geet is right....its like the whole universe us conspiring against them....
    neverthelss..The update was so impactful......and so painful......der are so many things dat i liked in the update...in spite of me wishing u should nt have given such an update at all....:(:(...
    .i would say the minute details dat u have taken in writing.......geet not bein
    gable to hear clearly on waking up......her restlessness and fear in not finding maan and nikita.....
    Her madness  and being completely out if mind.on seeing maan s and nikta s state....
    It created an anxiety and tension while i was reading it....
    And even till d last point where she is giving up her life....i got convinced dat she would actually jump before the truck...and was wondering wddr the story would actualy end like dis.....:o...:o..
    .my mind did not go to d thought if her expecting and forgot bout her baby completely....so unexpected ......
    So yes .....kudos to u osheen for dis update....u have written it with somuch conviction....:):)....

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  11. Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !!!! please don't tell me Maan & Nikita died . It'll b really painful for Geet to live this life all alone :'( it has to b doing of Mr. C & at hospital Geet sees Maan lifeless & pale
    Dadima accuses Geet that coz of her ; her children are no more :( she wanted to embrace death by the coming truck bt stepped away the last min coz sshe's pregnant with Maan''s baby :'(

    Plz I pray Maan & Niks both are alive :'(

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  12. Gosh!!! What was that for?? Did not expect it at all! I was really happy reading the update, thinking that now Maan had found her and he is not angry with Geet. They just need to talk and now Geet will confess everything happened and also will reveal about Mr.C chasing her. Then Maan would get into action to trace Mr.C. And Geet needs to tell Maan that they going to be parents again.
    But you planned for a blast!!! Like seriously?? And worst case Maan and Nikita are dead now. That can’t be happening. Looks like Mr.C track down Geet’s place and planned for the blast.
    I still can’t believe it that Maan and Nikita are dead, this can’t be happening… Maybe dadima is using this situation to get rid of Geet… Please let it be that the old granny playing some trick…
    Now dadima is blaming Geet for Maan’s death, poor soul she is already heart broken and now gets to be blamed. She have nowhere to go, choose to kill herself but right on time she remembered that’s a little life within her growing. A symbol of love between her and Maan, she need to safeguard it…


    ajenn

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  13. ohhh god
    i m not liking this
    but grt part

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  14. Damn that boss of her's! i believe he is the one behind this blast. I know maan & nikita are alive they can't die like this.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  15. Part 55
    Oh…scary part. What happened to maan & niki…are they really dead..? dadi accused her for killing them. Hope she was not lying just to get rid of geet. What is going to happen now.. how will geet live. Glad she stopped herself before pushing herself in front of truck to save their child.

    IF - Madhuri53

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