Thursday 17 September 2015

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 50

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED


PART 50




I am sorry for never saying it. She started her voice muffled in his chest, she wasn’t even sure he was listening or not. But I have felt it for a long time. I was afraid of saying it out loud, fearing if I said it, it would turn too real. The hidden powers of the universe would know n take you away. Like they destroyed everyone and everything that I loved. Although if it means so much to you and I know it does, I am not going to hold back. I love you, Maan.

Say that again. He reared back not believing his ears. All this time he had been waiting for this moment n now it had come.

I love you. You and only you. I have never loved any man before you n I will never any other man again. I promise you that on my life.

Her past and her confession brought tears to his eyes and they rolled down his face. She caught one drop in her palm, wishing upon it to always keep him happy; after all, the tear was as rare as a shooting star.

Maan thought about how he had accused her of having an affair when in his heart he knew she couldn’t do that to him, he’d just wanted to hurt her. To make her feel some of the pain that she gave him. He was such a fool. How could he even think about hurting this angle, who in such a short span of her life had endured several centuries of pain.

I promise you the same. He kissed all over face n she laughed through the tears. 

Now it’s your turn to say you love me. I love to hear it as much as you do.

I love you, my love. He said n she closed her eyes allowing the words to wash over her. Those words somehow had become more precious now that she had told him every bit of her ugly past.



Maan signed the deal n then they attended the evening party afterwards briefly. Geet wanted to go home as soon as possible, she didn’t want to miss the few days she had with Manan. Considering that Maan had arranged for them to leave the same night.

Geet could easily tell Maan was excited that this deal with the Japanese company had worked out. During most their time in the private jet he kept explaining her how the Japanese company now would exclusively make construction machines only for KC. The extremely modern and efficient machinery was one of its kinds. Nobody in India or even world had that kind of technology in their hands. Of course it had cost KC a damn big fortune but in long term they were going earn insane amount of profits from this exclusive association.

After the initial interest Geet began to get bored yet she pretended to listen to her workaholic husband since he was so thrilled.

When they finally reached home the next morning, Manan wasn’t there as he was at Nikita’s place. It’s early to drop at Niki’s place. We should get some rest and then we’ll go there n get Manan.

Geet nodded. We will rest only. Don’t bore me with more business talks.

He narrowed his eyes. Now my talks are boring?

Yes, they are. She smirked jokingly, showing him her tongue.

He couldn’t hold back his smile. Then you should be with me always to make my life interesting.

A good suggestion I must say. She threw back going into the bathroom. Maan followed her inside.

I am serious, love. I was thinking if you would like to take over as the head of design department in KC. He hoisted her up on the counter and moved between her legs. You are exceptionally talented n your ideas are fresh, innovative. The clients loved your work. So what’s say, Mrs. Khurana, we rock the world together?

I don’t want to work, Maan. I am tired of working. Now I just want to be at the house, make this our home. I know I suck at it all but I will learn…. be a good wife n mother. I want to be what other people call boring housewife. Maybe once this session ends we could bring Manan to live with us, permanently. From below her thick, dark lashes she looked at him, trying to gauge what he thought about whatever she said.

He pecked her lips. Whatever you want, we’ll work out.

Wrapping hands around his neck, she said. Thanks, you are the best.



Manan was too happy to see his parents back. He bombarded them with questions about the foreign country and random things. Every time, Manan addressed Geet as mother, Maan swelled with joy. He got a sense like his family was complete.

Maan wasn’t much of a talker but he liked sitting back and watching Geet and Manu as they chatted and also bickered over various topics. Manan’s inhibitions towards Geet had evaporated totally and he was in love with her now. She had that easy and casual air about herself. Men specifically-kid or adult-couldn’t ignore her charm.

A week and half later it was time for their baby to go back to Mumbai. He had to leave for Maan’s place there to spend the rest of his vacations with his grandmother. While it was a known fact that Maan’s step mother was amazing, Geet was apprehensive about Dadimaa. Maan assured her that his mother was going to take care of him in addition to keeping him away from Dadimaa.

Unwilling, she consented when she had no heart to let go of her little one.

Manan was to be taken back to Mumbai by a trusted employee of Maan. You’re sure he’ll reach their fine? Shouldn’t we go with him? Geet fretted as they walked into the airport. They including- Nikita, Geet, Maan and Manu with security and the one who was going to go with Manu.

Geet, Manu n Dheraj are quite familiar with each other. Dheraj always brings and take Manu back. So there is nothing to worry here.

Geet wanted to differ. If she didn’t keep her mind busy with worry she was going to cry. Gosh, a kid was going to make her cry now. She was surely losing it. But, it wasn’t some ordinary kid, was it? It was her kid. Credits to Maan they were allowed at the airport all the way to runway. Once everyone had said their goodbyes to Manu, Geet sat on her knees and smoothed his hairs. I am going to miss you so damn much.

She said her heart breaking. Too me, mums. Manan threw his arms around her neck. She held back tears because if she cried her baby would catch the vibe and cry with her, and then how would she be able to let go?

Take care of yourself, okay? Love you. She pecked his lips. Dheraj took Manan’s hand n they walked ahead, away. Geet watched until Manan had climbed the stairway n waved when he turned back before entering the plane. Eventually, when Geet turned around with teary eyes, she saw Nikita’s head resting on Maan’s shoulder. She was looking at her with an expression of awe. Maan was smiling, his face soft and calm.

Motherhood suits you, babes. Nikita said coming forward and engulfing Geet in a hug. Manan’s birthday is next month. We’ll all go to Mumbai and give him a kickass party.

I think that a perfect idea. Her eyes sought Maan and he gave nod of agreement.

Let’s go, you two. Maan held the ladies’ hands and pulled them along while the plane took off behind.

 


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YAY!! Half century...!!


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17 comments:

  1. Congrats on half century Osheen.. great work and one of the best stories i have been reading with something different.

    This update was awesome.. the way they confessed their love and the way Maan asked Geet to join business but geet baby wants to be a housewife and a mother and she is happy with it. Poor Geet her baby is gone and the way she was crying gosh. it was so touchy. Manan is not her kid yet she loves him this shows tat even the cruelty of the world could not take the innocent heart of hers. The love she had was still intact and now she showers in on Maan and Manan but god when she will tell about Dev.. one questioned tat i want asnwer.

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  2. beautiful update... n congo for half century updates...

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  3. Wow the most awaited confession of geet for maan :)
    Maan funally heard that :D
    Maanu going :(
    Geet loves maanu so much :)
    Lolz niki is right ;)

    But still more past to share geet -_-

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  4. Congrats on Beautiful half century dear :)
    Awesomly Awesome update yar :-)
    loved it a lot :-)
    Sona :)

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  5. eautiful update so finally maan n geet sought out everything n here happy they are like a happy family !!will miss manan too he is too cute n agree with niks motherhood suits geet she is such a loving mother n protective too!!

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  6. Congrats on half century
    Awesome update
    Maan is accepting everything geet says

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  7. Congratulations on half century. So happy for you.

    The update was yet again emotionally painful in the start. And I swear down if Maan even thinks of putting even a single tear in Geet's eyes or hurt her deliberately cos she wouldn't let him in then I'm so gonna he hating him. Specially after him knowing the details of her past, he should try his best to understand from where she is coming and be patient with her.

    So far she has dealt with everyone single storm in her life all alone, right from the age of 18. She had to grow fast above her age and lose everything she had. So trusting Maan with her heart was the most incredible thing she had ever done and can ever do. She has finally confessed she loves him and if he ever doubts on that love or accuses she is having an affair, then he won't be only a fool that he called himself in this update but also an unworthy and undeserving man. Who despite knowing everything can still point fingers at her character then for me he never actually loved her like he claimed. He wanted a confession, he got it and he better respect that and not point fingers at her or hurt her. Cos then he would surely lose all respect in my eyes. Opening to such a past and reopening all the wounds must have killed Geet again. The girl has already endured pain that she could last lifetime. She doesn't need more. Not more Maan at least. So I'm hoping he wouldn't repeat the history of the past week of treatment he gave her and end up hurting both of them.

    Missed Manan. He came and gave Geet a new relationship. New identity. And myriad of emotions sure. He must have stirred something deep in her to love him so much. She is crazily in love with her son and I'm super pleased to know Manan is on the same page as her.

    Now that Manan has gone I'm wondering how Geet will manage and what will keep her busy? She wants to be housewife and I'm also glad Maan is letting her have the freedom to decide for herself. She indeed has worked a lot and maybe she deserves some rest. Emotionally and mentally.

    Updates have been so sad. Even with everything getting back at normal and Geet confessing I couldn't help but feel sad that Manan is going back. I wanted to see him bonding with Maan some more. Gonna miss the kid.

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  8. yey.. finally back to home.. they spend some awesome family time together.. n Maan too was enjoying with both.. Nikita too is happy.. may be must say.. Nikita is only person who knows Geet as good human other than Maan.. n now Manana too.. Cool one .. love it..

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  9. congrants on the half century..
    it's so good to see manan attachment to geet..
    and geet she was teary seeing her baby going away..
    and I love nikita she is geet support..
    and geet want manan to stay with them. and so maan agreed for geet..

    loved it

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  10. hey many congrats for d halfcentury. geet has unveiled finally a part of her self but d incident that has triggered all this has not been revealed & i guess in future dev is just going 2 take advantage of that & may create unwanted problem

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  11. Awww me too want Manan to shift with their mommy & daddy permanently :D :D Beautiful part , Manan addressing Geet is mom always made Maan happy . Finally it was time for Manan to leave & Geet feeling sad . Her cute moments with Manan is observed by Maan & Nikita & Nikita tells Geet that Motherhood suits her awwwww❤❤❤❤loved it:D

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  12. CONGRATS yaar ur FF hits a 50 :D :D ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  13. Fabulous updates. Thanks for updating. Geet's past is so painful.

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  14. @tania here.at first congrates for half century.maan wanted geet in office but geet wants to be a mother nd housewife.maan felt now he has a complete family.geet wanted to keep manu with them.but now on manu has to go to mumbai.geet felt helpless for it.niki loved geet s motherly love to manu.superb part

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  15. The whole part is really awesome to read... Finally she confessed her love to Maan, the 3 words that Maan was dying to hear all the time. Thou by heart she loves him with all her heart but she need to confess it as well. Now things are back in good shape within Maaneet.
    Both back to their home sweet home. Maan suggested Geet to join his business but she prefer to be a good housewife and a mother to Manan. She wants to take care of Maan and Manan which gives her immerse happiness and Maan let her do whatever she is happy with.
    Aww it’s time for Manan to leave to his boarding school again. Poor Geet was really sad and Nikita gave a good news that his birthday is on the way and they can give him a visit…
    It was pleasant sight whern both Nikita and Geet lying on Maan’s shoulder… too sweet….


    ajenn

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  16. lovely part. they're back to their home sweet home & geet eagerly wants to meet manan.
    Now both of their relation has gone too deep, manan loves his mother as much his mother loves her back.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  17. Part 50
    Congrats for the fiftieth part. They confessed their love for each together. Maan felt bad that he accused her for having affaire then. All sorted out but still dev’s problem is still hanging. Geet got bored with his b’ness talk. Maan offered her job at kc but she was happy doing her housewife job. Oh…manan gone to Mumbai. Geet was crying that he was leaving. She became a real mother of manan.

    IF - Madhuri53

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