Thursday 17 September 2015

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 46

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED


PART 46




Maan entered the house tired as hell with a sleeping Manan in arms. Geet legs were giving up as she followed behind with balloons, toys and packets of leftover food. She left everything in the living room uncaring of the mess that she created. She would sort the stuff n keep it at their places tomorrow or ask someone to do it.

Manan although tiny was a dynamite of energy. He just wouldn’t tire; it was a miracle that the little bomb finally fell asleep on the way back from Adventure Island.

It was odd to visit an amusement park, with her kid and husband. Correction: Angry husband. Another correction: Empty amusement park!!

Maan had made sure that the park was closed for common folks and only the staff and vendors were there. He had said it was necessary for safety purposes. Geet agreed fully. It was another thing she wouldn’t have argued even if she hadn’t considering how Maan wasn’t very happy with her already. 

Apart from all that, the strangest thing was she had immense fun. She didn’t care for a while that Maan wasn’t talking to her, that her new marriage was almost falling apart. No, she cared for nothing. With her son, she was a kid. And he preferred her that way. She knew it because Manan said himself that he thought she was cool.

Nobody had called her cool before.

She was always a nerd before she became a prostitute. So it was new. Everything was new. They’d gone on rides together. Except the ones that were too daring for her tastes n would have made her vomit. Maan accompanied Manan on those. Their baby was a brave little thing. They ate many things too n not at a restaurant. Instead they ate from stores- burgers, cotton candies, pop tarts and things she hadn’t even heard names of. And they had clicked hundreds and hundreds of pictures. God, she had never laughed this much in her entire life. Maan had seemed happy too.

As Maan laid Manan on bed, Geet saw the scene from doorway. She was exhausted to the core but didn’t want to miss any moment of this day. Maan came out of the room.

Maan… She called but he continued towards the guest room.

Geet held his hand but didn’t know what to say. She wished he would read her eyes but he vacantly stared like she was wasting his time.

Don’t do this to me.

I fancy my indifference hurting you as much as you showcase, but I know better. Still, if it bothers you-even a little bit-you deserve it, and much more.

He held her hand n removed it from over his walking away- just like that, bursting her bubble.

Geet knew he was hurting, more than her. He couldn’t live without her. She didn’t know why he wouldn’t believe her then? Why he would think something so absurd? She needed him n he needed her, this distance would kill them. Despite her better judgment, she walked to the guest room n tried the knob. It was locked from inside.

Maan, open the door. She said to receive no response. Knocking was just as useless. If Manan was not there under the same roof she would have knocked the door down or at least deafened Maan with her constant beating. Obviously that wasn’t possible with their kid sleeping peacefully a few rooms away. Now she hated herself for knocking at Maan’s door like an idiot when he wouldn’t even spare her a reply. She ran back to the bedroom and flopped on the bed crying.

She couldn’t cry for long because she was so tired, her eyes gave up only minutes later. So she didn’t notice Maan standing at door seeing how she cried herself to sleep. She didn’t see him torn over whether to stay or leave. She didn’t see him covering her with sheets and kissing her forehead. Most importantly she didn’t see the tears in his eyes as he pushed himself out of the door, distancing himself from his love, his life.


Geet woke up with her head hurting like no tomorrow, the sun rays beat cruelly down her face. It was ten in the morning. She got up n came downstairs only to see that Maan had left for office (as expected) n Manan was having breakfast. When she came n sat at a chair, he jumped on her lap and gave her a hug. Geet kissed him on the lips n cheeks. Good morning, Manu.

Manan smiled brightly. Good morning, maa. Without knowing he had made her day. She had breakfast with her son then gulped down a pill for headache.

You sick? Manan asked when he saw her taking the pill.

Nope. Just a little pain in head, baby.

Doctor makes better the pain. He told wisely.

Geet raised a brow. She could already see a glimpse of Maan in him. He would surely be just as protective and bossy as his father.

The pill will suffice.

Suf- suf- sufai?

Geet laughed and explained in his words. Make better the pain.

Surprisingly enough Maan came home early that evening, at four only. Geet thought it was a good sign n maybe things were going get better because seriously how more downhill they could go?

She had been watching cartoon with Manan when Maan arrived and went to his room. She wanted to follow him. Although, the fear that he would leave again if she went immediately after him, kept her rooted on the couch.

Dad’s early. Manan said. We could go out, eat pizza.

Geet nodded enthusiastically. Yes, good idea. Let’s go tell him.

They both went upstairs and their heart broke for different reasons seeing Maan packing his bags.

You are going somewhere? Geet asked dreading the answer.

Yes, I am leaving for Japan to finalize a deal.

Japan? How long? She couldn’t believe it; he was leaving so suddenly, that too out of the country. Wherever Maan went, she mostly went with him.

2-4 days or maybe more. It depends on how things will shape up there.

I want to go too. Manan stole words from Geet’s mouth. She looked at Maan hoping against hope that he would take them too.

Manan, I am going for business. I won’t be able to take you anywhere n I have to leave as soon as possible so you can’t come. Geet couldn’t go too was obvious. She didn’t need his words to know that. Why’ll he take a cheating wife with him anyways? She thought bitterly.

When it was time for Maan to leave, he only consoled an upset Manan; Geet was almost invisible standing at one side feeling speechless and wretched. He sat in his shinning car and left without as much as a backward glance, making her wonder if it really was that easy for him to leave her.

After Maan left she was nothing but an empty shell. She felt betrayed for no reason, and miserable. It felt like everything had ended. If he could leave her for a couple of days like that, he could leave her for forever too. So was this just the start?

She spent the following day mostly in bed telling she was sick, she actually felt kind of sick. Even Manan couldn’t lift her cloudy mood. He came to call her for basketball game but she told she would today watch the match from her room through the window. As opposed to her words she couldn’t watch the match; her mind was in a far away land following Maan- who had left her without a goodbye or a look. Every time she thought about it, she felt the pain. Pain so excruciating it was almost suffocating. So many times she stared at the phone wanting to ring him but what good was it going to do. He wouldn’t magically appear before her; instead she would just feel more pathetic, more lifeless… knowing he didn’t care.

Night arrived and it was more difficult to endure. The silence was biting. Her empty bed was no less than a monster, giving a preview of her remaining lonesome life. She wanted to get drunk so sleep would claim her. But I am mother now. She told herself n kept squirming in the bed whole night. It was around five in the morning, a shrill chime resounded in the room. When she realized it was her phone, hope burned in her even though the bigger, smarter part of her said it wasn’t Maan.

She snatched her phone n it was some weird, unknown number. Her first thought was that it might be Dev. But his number was saved with her. She took the call. Hello.

Nobody spoke. Hello, who is it?

Then like she could recognize the rhythm of his breaths, tears pooled in her eyes. Maan…

When she was certain he wasn’t going to speak anything, he said three simple words. I miss you. And the line went dead.


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@Sanjana & Shoba
You both are amazing :*


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16 comments:

  1. Why amazing.. Yaar you write so beautifully tat i can't stop myself from commenting..

    The update was superb.. It was filled with pain.. but more then Geet i feel for Maan here.. He loves her so much tat he feels like a failure in not understanding her. He knows she's hiding something and is in pain but she isn't telling him and tat hurts him.. He shows his anger but he can't stay away and those three little words I miss you.. god it was so heart wrenching. Geet is playing a dangerous game now.. and by hiding she's making her marriage to go into a direction where no one would be able to save it and somewhere it shows tat she does not trusts Maan by not telling him..

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  2. simply amazing...
    maans simple confession i miss you.. touched my heart deep...
    geet n maan both are hurting more by staying apart...

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  3. Lol empty amusing park :P
    Manan enjoyed so much :)
    But other side maaneet drifting apart!!
    Geet is ruining their relationship by herself -_-
    She could tell maan -_-
    Clear maans mu..
    Maan cares for her :( loves her so much n its obvious he would not accept geet hiding something

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  4. tania here.amazing part.maaneet went to park with manaan.still maan not talking with geet.geet also did fault by keeping herself from maan.its high time she should tell him about dev.why geet purposely breaking her married life for a nasty person like dev.she know,maan can't live without her.geet wanted to sleep with maan at nite but maan stayed in guest room nd locked the door.geet cried nd slept alone in her room.maan watching her alwz without knowing her.suddenly maan went to japan for a deal.maanaan nd geet both r upset for this.geet feeling so lonely without him.finally maan called her to tell that he missed him.can't wait for next after reading it

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  5. Yar yeh sab kab tak chalay ga :( Hope sab jaldi theek ho jayae :(
    SONA :)

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  6. Loved the update
    Both are hurting
    How long will geet take to trust him with the truth

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  7. so sad poor geet can't win no matter how much she tries shes bringing father and son close but feels like she's losing maan hopefully those 3 words heal her wounded heart can't wait for next love it

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  8. Maan booked the whole park for Manan. He is crazy when it comes to his loved ones. He could really go to any lengths to keep them safe and protected.


    Happy to know Manan enjoyed and seeing him Geet and Maan did as well.

    However I couldn't help be a bit mad at Maan. If he is really distancing from for her, when it's so bloody clear he is hurting much more just cos he thinks she is having an affair with Shaan, then I'm disappointed in him. But if he is distancing himself from her cos he wants her to come around and trust him with whatever issues she was having for a week that she hid it from then maybe I'll support him. Cos even I don't know what would it take for Geet to open up to him and tell him all the truth of Dev and what he did to her. It was killing her inside and to think that she is getting over it all alone, shutting Maan out is far more painful. I'm more sad that despite having such selfless lover by her side, who would lay the world down at her feet, she is so helpless and feels used just cos a filthy man tried to rape her. It's killing, really. I was feeling way too bad for Geet.

    But then I couldn't help feel for Maan as well. The guy loves her like insane then why isn't he coaxing her to tell him everything? She already doesn't let him in so him shutting out on her is really the solution? The three words "I miss you" never made pinch me so much like it did in this update. It was heart breaking.

    I know both Maan and Geet are suffering but I can't help feel more for Geet. Maybe cos I've always had this special soft corner for her being a girl myself. It's easy to relate and connect to her than Maan. The way Maan went without even sparing a look was heart breaking.

    Emotional update. But intense as well.

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  9. Maan is hurting herself n her too.. Do u really care.. ? she must be hiding sometjhing may be which will hurt U.. so U need to be careful.. agar woh batati nahi kuch toh atleast U should make sure to dig matter.. but he is in his own miseries.. hope someone will wakehim up.. Manan is so Cute. n he is the reason Geet will be good.. deffo.. but how long..?

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  10. geet tried talking maan but he is not ready..
    he want her to open up.
    how he too cries with geet seeing her in pain..
    and when maan left without saying anything to her..
    she felt too broken.

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  11. Hey osheeennnnnn.....:):)....
    In the last update i was very disappointed with maan accusing geet.....but in dis update.. .i saw thinga from his point of view......and i actually empathise with him now.....he is a human after all.....his patience had to break some time......and any person in anger is bound to tell all the mean things.....and all the rationality is forgotten.......maan had taken all her silence right from the start with so much of patiennce......and seeing geet with shaan would have been the breaking point for him.....
    .....how long wpuld he have endured her shutting herself ........
    And geet ....partly to be blamed and not as well....yes she did wrong by not telling dev s matter but she has her own insecurities and inhibitions dat obstructs from lettting it out......
    .and the consequences leaves dem suffering.....but i am glad at least maan has broken his vow of not at all talking to her.......
    I feel.bad for geet much more dan maan.....guys may be very closed up wen it comes to emotions....but wen gals are concerned de are very very sensitive. ....so i can understand the helplessness dat she goes through.....

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  12. So they had a wonderful experience at Adventure Island . For few minutes albeit they forgot abt where their marriage is heading . Manan is a breather like a whiff of fresh air , & after whole day's excitement they came home dock tired . Geet tried to talk with Maan but he already gave his verdict that she prolly deserves the misery she's getting . Next day he left for Japan & only consoled a sad Manan . Geet feels heartbroken almost like this is the beginning of the end bt Maan calls her to tell he misses her . Lovely ud❤❤❤❤❤.

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  13. Equally feeling sad for Maan and Geet. Both blamed are not to but situation is not favouring them. Maan’s confession is clear, he is also hurting himself along with Geet. Distancing himself from Geet is not an easy job for Maan, He is really obsessed and possessive towards Geet. Seeing behaving like this with Geet, must really hurt him beyond… Now worse part he left to Japan leaving disoriented Geet behind…. Geet is heartbroken not knowing what to do and Maan’s sudden phone call is a gift….. Hopefully things will get better….


    ajenn

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  14. they both are in pain. Maan feels like a failure at the moment as his wife is not ready to let him know what's bothering her. Geet should understand that keeping secrets from maan is only deteriorating their relation. She needs to open up to him.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  15. Part 46
    He was still angry on her. But she already told him everything about shaan. Why angry on her for this. They almost like patched up everything and again his incapability for understanding came bet them. Why he always accuse her of betrayal. Whatever she doing was perfect not to spoil their relationship but her past comes bet his trust issue. He left for japan and didn’t bother to tell her forget taking her with him. She was hurt. From my pov geet is correct more than maan. Finally maan could not bare this distance and called her to say he missed her.

    IF - Madhuri53

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