Monday 14 September 2015

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 44

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED


PART 44




We’ve to go a party at seven thirty. Wait for me in the bedroom n don’t wear anything. Maan texted Geet while she was watching 'UP' with Manan. His weird request about her not wearing anything made her red. Why would he want that if they had to go to a party? Nobody could guess what Maan was planning; he always came up with something unexpected.

Maan came home at quarter to seven n when he entered the room Geet was stark naked. He gulped now regretting his choice of words. Geet, I didn’t mean that you have to sit naked for me.

But you said don’t wear anything. She replied innocently furrowing her brows.

Maan closed his eyes. I wanted you to not wear anything for party, because I bought something for you.

What? She asked excitedly walking towards him.

Maan turned around. If she stayed naked in his vicinity for another minute he would explode and they wouldn’t be leaving the house before nine, or ten. That didn’t sound like a bad idea. No, Maan! Control.

Bra n panties please.

Geet pouted n entered the walk-in closet. When she came out, she was in undergarments.

Better. Maan stated pulling out box from the bag. Geet knew what was there in it before he opened the box.

No, Maan, not one of those. Surely there was a gorgeous white saree inside the box with matching blouse n skirt. He had even brought her matching sandals n accessories. It almost felt wrong denying him. Almost.

Geet couldn’t handle a saree. Last time she had ended up with a bump on her forehead. I am not wearing it. I will make a fool of myself and you in front of everyone.

No, you won’t. I will be there with you. I won’t let you fall, I swear.

I don’t even know how to wear it properly.

I know.

Wha- He cut her off and made her wear the in-skirt and blouse. Then he picked the saree and his hands were magic. He wrapped it expertly around her waist, placed the perfectly folded pallu on her shoulder and completed the handiwork with flawless pleats.

Geet walked and the saree didn’t falter her steps. It was tied the right height. Not too high, not too low. Oh. My. God. How did you do that?

Maan raised his collar. Learned it on internet.

Just like that? You saw it in video or something and learned. This is so perfect, what would you practice on? Geet asked amazed. How could Maan do it when she couldn’t after so much of headache?

Maan cleared his throat, his cheeks getting red. I practiced on myself.

What? Geet laughed then her eyes brimmed with tears. God, she was becoming so senti these days. For me?

Who else? I didn’t want you giving up on something that you liked at first.

She hugged him. Thank you.

Maan got ready too and Geet did her makeup. In the living room, Manan was watching TV and Nikita was there with him. Nina was preparing dinner in the kitchen.

What are you guys watching? Maan asked horrified, seeing semi-naked ladies parading on ramp.

Fashion TV. Nikita said. Manan has to know what his aunt does for living. You see all those dresses, baby. They are made by designers like me. Although mine are far better.

It’s boring. Manan said making a face.

Nikita’s mouth hung open at Manan’s response.

Damn, Niki, you’ll ruin my kid. Maan switched off the TV.

Language, Maan. Nikita smirked.

While Nikita and Maan fought, Manan asked Geet if he could go with them to the party.

The parties your father goes to are boring. There are no games or anything. I hate them really. How about you stay with Niks aunty tonight and tomorrow we’ll take you out.

Manan eyes glowed at that. Yes. That cool.

Now give me a kiss. Geet forwarded her cheek.

Manan turned beetroot red. Noooo.

Yessss. Please.

Manan gave her quick, shy peck that went straight to her heart. She kissed his cheek n they left.



Geet truly hated Maan’s business parties but also knew Maan hated them just as much, so she was accompanied him whenever he asked. Now she stood alone, thankfully. She had discreetly excused herself from the crowd that surrounded and went to her usual place, at the bar- only good thing about these parties. But she was planning on drinking much. She was a mother now.

Fortunately, Deepika hadn’t graced the event with her presence. Geet wondered if that had something to do with what had happened in Maan’s cabin. Perhaps, she knew Maan would come with her and so Deepika had skipped the party. The thought was delightful.

Just another five minutes, Geet started to feel bored and lonely. If Shaan was here he would’ve kept her entertained. The thought of him made her chest tighten. After coming back from Croatia, Geet had tried his number but he never received her calls. She didn’t dare text him with a sorry because he didn’t deserve a tiny sorry in text for she had used him in the worst manner. She looked around the room for him and found him at one the table talking to an elderly couple, laughing at something the lady was saying. Geet started towards him and their eyes met.

A waiter passed and Shaan wasn’t at his place anymore. She found him going out and followed.

Leaving party so soon?

He kept walking. Not your concern.

Geet flinched at his harsh tone. God, she had hurt him so bad. His face once he realized she had kissed him to show Maan wouldn’t leave her mind. She had to apologize not for herself but for him.

Shaan, I want to say sorry.

And that is supposed to make everything alright. I helped you at your worst and what did you do to me?

I know. I know I fucked up. But I didn’t want to hurt you. I don’t have many friends. Hell, I have only two friends n one of them Maan’s sister. You are special to me. I had no choice. I wanted Maan to leave me, because I wasn’t good for him n so I did what I did. Believe me, I regret it. I am sorry.

It was nasty thing to do. For a second I thought- leave it. Now don’t cry on me. He said punching her shoulder lightly. Geet smiled, a load getting off her chest. I wasn’t going to. She hugged him. Thanks. Thanks a lot. You are very kind.

Crap. Girl have called me many things but not kind, doesn’t go with the image, babes.

Geet rolled her eyes inwardly happy to see old Shaan back. Before she could give him a witty retort, Shaan was pushed away from her n punched in the face. Geet gasped looking at Maan who threw Shaan against the wall, keeping his hand lodged at Shaan’s neck. I told you stay away from her, didn’t I?

Get off me. Shaan warned.

Let him go. Geet pushed at Maan but he wouldn’t budge. You stay out of this. Maan glared at Geet. For a moment Geet was scared seeing the fury in Maan’s eyes but people had started to gather to see what all the commotion was about. If I ever see you again around my Geet, talking to her or even looking at her, I won't leave you like I am tonight.

He let go of Shaan n grabbed Geet. People parted to make way as they walked out.



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12 comments:

  1. what a day started ended on bad note
    .how happy maaneet were..
    and maan jealously ruined it..
    manan is really cute..
    so shy aww.. loved it
    seeing geet with shaan maan punched him..
    not fair..

    loved it

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  2. The start was ROFLing. It was hilarious. Poor Maan and poor Geet. He messed up with the choice of words he send in the text and she messed his senses. Lol.

    I almost melted when Maan said he learned to wrap the saree on himself for her. Why? Why this man has to love her so much? Can a man even love like that? It's crazy. Almost insane and so unreal.

    Anyway, Nikita was with Manan and I was glad about it. Cos when Maan mentioned about party, the first thought that came to me was, is Manan going to be alone at home? And that he is scared of staying alone. Nikita made the poor kid watch Fashion TV. What a torture.

    Geet met Shaan and apologised and he even accepted her apology for Maan to come and ruin everything. He punched Shaan in front of all and I'm wondering will this change Shaan? He is a character I'm still not sure about. Like Deeping, I know she is a bitch. But I don't know if Shaan is genuinely a good person or her pretends to be good.

    The end turned out pretty bad for Geet since Maan got into an unnecessary fight with Shaan without even getting his facts right.

    Looking forward to see where it goes from here.

    Thank you much for giving back to back updates. Loved reading it.

    (BrainEaterOwl)

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  3. Manan is really cute shy boy.. Geet went to party with MAan.. n Maan behaved like caveman there n he hit Shaan.. really Maan he just doesn't listen n act.. first part was supercute.. n then Maan's anger spoiled everything..

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  4. Seriously wat did mana message and geet followed.. she was all naked god tat was too much and poor maan had to control himself but it was too good and then niki god girl save teh little kid.. he does not need to know wat yuo do for a living and see those half naked girls but grr you did..

    hmm poor shaan all he did was help geet and everything he gets blasted by maan.. poor fellow does not have a good time when geet is neat him.

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  5. lovely update... manan is so cute...
    maan made chutny of shaan...

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  6. Lol the starting maan told geet not to wear anything n she took that seriously!!! ROFL
    N maan seriously practiced how to wear sari!!! That too on himself :P hahahah
    Nikki!!!! 0_0
    Koi manan ko bachao isse!!!!
    Geet got her friend back :)
    But maan..... :|

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  7. @tania khaled here.Geet went to party with maan.there she met shaan.she told him sorry to use him.but maan made it difficult.he beat shaan without knowing the reason.geet still not doing anything

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  8. Lol Geet is becoming like Manan :P she's so innocent ahahaha ! he asked her not to wear anything referring to the party & Geet was waiting for him stark naked😂.... he made her wear a white sari that he learnt to tie by watching videos on himself awwwwwww❤Geet is overwhelmed by the gesture

    She sees Shaan & since he din revert back any msges she decided she owes him an apology for how badly she treated him for her benefit . She apologizes to him & Shaan is so sweet he does forgive her but oops !!! Maan again misunderstands & punches him -_- uff iska Gussa Poor Shaan😢he warns him to stay away from Geet & dashes out of the party with her .

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  9. Geet was really crazy, she sat naked in their bedroom just like what Maan written in her text. And Maan lost his insanity once seeing her full naked.
    He got her saree and even practised on himself, which was really sweet act of Maan.
    Nikita training Manan to watch all TV shows on fashion but poor boy is bored. Manan is really an shy shy boy , he doesn’t want to kisss Geet but only did when she forced him. Such a sweetie pie…
    Thing turn pretty bad in the party.. Geet meet Shaan in the party, she went after him and apologised for using him. He felt hurt and angry because she used him for dirty trick. But he could not control his anger when she sincerely told him that he is her good friend. He accepted him apology and gave a brief hug.
    Wrong timing man, Maan can right on time and warned Shaan to stay away from Geet… He should have at least listen to Geet… Shaan was just being nice towards Geet….. Jealousy I guess…


    ajenn

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  10. hahahah maan tried saree n hmslef so that he can make geet wore it how can someone nt fall for him nd rblem solved between geeet n shaan nd maan he punched him poor soul

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  11. hahhahahahaha geet bhi na! Maan was controlling a lot of himself seeing her naked.
    manan wants to go with them but geet came up with a plan that they will go for outing the next day.
    In the party she saw shaan & try to mend things b/w them but maan, end up warning him.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  12. Part 44

    Omg…geet literally was naked as maan asked her to. He brought sari for her for the party. Geet hated such parties and got bored very soon. She saw shaan and asked her apology for being mean to him. He too instantly forgave her. But possessive maan punched him and warned him to stay away from him…poor shaan. He was good with and he was asked to stay away & that dev was so leech and still he was not aware of his doings. Manan was cute

    IF - Madhuri53

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